Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Friday, May 7, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Good girl Millie - small ripples make big waves. Good poster presentation, with colours and pictures. Make sure you have a clear title, and this title is different to the other words for next time.
ReplyDeleteGreat poster with a good message! I think that the message would be clearer if instead of focusing on the negative stuff, you could instead focus on being nice!
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Deletethanks for telling me next time i will add it in.
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